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Dear RS, could you choose one among your stories that's your favorite? Which one?

I could. It's a fan fiction novel, however, and I don't want to mix this pen name (the SF and Fantasy commercial author) with the other pen name. The good news is the plot lines and the major characters are my creation. I am rewriting many of the stories totally in my own universe, now.

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#ScribesAndMakers 2503.26 — Ask the expert: if you're a specialist in something, would you answer questions for writers/artists regarding your specialty?

I'll answer, but in public threads as one of my things is helping as many people as I can. Jack or Jill of many trades, but an expert in none? Let's see:

  • I've now watched 102 Korean drama series and many more Japanese anime series, so I have some perspective there.
  • If you've followed me, I fancy myself an experimental chef (fancy being a keyword with multiple meanings).
  • I have some insights into oral traditions (folklore). RS has a degree.
  • I take pretty pictures, but went from a professional DSLR to using an iPhone most of the time.
  • I'm am arguably good at storytelling. My agent said that was the best thing about me. I might be convinced to answer questions like "How do you write a fight scene?" or "Is attention to gender all that important?" or "Is grammar good? Or… It's bad, isn't?"
  • What I am is an expert at being shy, what it feels like, and what that means to a person. You may ask me about that.

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#PennedPossibilities 619 2/2— What type of “accent” does your MC have? Tell us about their voice. Discuss speech patterns, vocabulary, slang, or their way of speaking, if you like.

OMG! After reading everybody's very interesting replies, it struck me.

As per her backstory, the daughter of an immigrant, she must have an accent.

Yes, she does. In the story, Thorn Rose's mother is also refugee. Think a peasant Jew snuggled out from Nazi Germany speaking German and Yiddish. Thorn looks like the "race" in power in the nation, think 1960s Anglo-Saxon Protestant white bread, but when she speaks she's discriminated against.

The male MC, Streak, encounters the accent first in the story and now I'm going to have to revise that chapter. When he is dragged to meet a bellicose ambassador in a very disruptive meeting, he can't help but recognize Thorn Rose's mother's accent.

It's draconic.

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#PennedPossibilities 619 — What type of “accent” does your MC have? Tell us about their voice. Discuss speech patterns, vocabulary, slang, or their way of speaking, if you like.

As per her backstory, the daughter of an immigrant, she must have an accent. But she's been schooled "here" her whole life, so it would be faint. In our terms, it would be equivalent to meeting a white girl but she has a faintly Cuban accent. There is no cognate to Earthly accents to play off of, and if I mention it, it will be that her mother has the accent or someone will startle, or will suddenly be prejudiced against her when they weren't before she opened her mouth.

As per his backstory, he might have an accent but it would evidence itself as less precise English: lots of contractions, mild burrs, bad (simplified) grammar, that type of thing. A flavor of Street Talk. I think I'll skip describing it in the story because most of the story takes place at least seven years after he meets her. She's so precise about things she's almost obsessive, and she'd correct any and all lazy speech. Indeed, he's what he is, going to university instead of accepting a blue collar job, and eventually becoming an astronaut because of her attention to detail in his life. He loves pleasing her, however (and in our terms loves her), so it's his choice to change, always. Some will assert he's easily manipulated, of course, but that's another topic.

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#PennedPossibilities 614 — SC POV: What is one phrase that you would really like to hear right now?

[SC:] It's wonderful and horribly embarrassing but I've got a crush on my new friend. She saved my life, but then I saved hers in a return, so maybe it's the intensity of that fateful 24 hours. I've only been with men before, even went to the trouble of flying tandem with the bad boy in high school to get him. Somehow she's different, so entirely smarter than me that it isn't funny, but oh so sexy and patient when she teaches a nobody like me things. Hormones don't lie, they just torment you! I know what I feel, and I don't flapping care that I've never felt this way before.

Unfortunately, she's got boyfriends. Two! They're rather important personages, despite being men—and for political reasons she's stated she's pregnant by one of them, but not by which. I think she's making it up, but I wasn't there. Worse, she's gushed about reconciling with her childhood sweetheart (okay, that had been a flapping mess) in that special way that says she's got further plans for the man, and I know for a fact that she's been eyeing her former teammate from the mob, the one I watched her give a kiss that could melt a mountain of ice. It helped melt my heart! I so want to be him, any of them, but I'm missing sir parts.

I'm going from being circumspect to stumbling over my words in an instant. I keep pretending the accidental contract is accidental, or misconstrued. Worse, as her bodyguard in training, I'm around her all the time and am sometime hands-on. I feel like I am going to explode!

[Author writes:] If I ever write this sequel to the story the SC was developed in, it may be from her POV. I don't think it will ruin much to say that if the SC were simply to ask, the words she'd hear might really surprise her.

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#WordWeavers 2503.15 — If your SC found a wallet full of money, what would they do with it?

It feels like I am dodging the question by stating that the society does not have a concept of bank notes, thus no billfolds or wallets. Instead, things like IDs are typically made out of copper, etched to show a diffraction pattern, and lacquered heavily so they don't rub against bare skin—and worn on a lanyard. The characters often refer to money as "coin" because it is, and they keep that in a coin pouch.

Bolt, if she were to find the lanyard, would turn it in, or find the person if they were part of her cohort. Because of the nature of the clothing in this extremely hot climate era, things like coin pouches are visible and tend to be considered an accessory or an ornament, are sometimes distinctive, and not too rarely custom. If she found one, she might know to whom it belonged and would attempt to return it. If she found a generic specimen, it might be a different story. She has always had a difficult life, and if the chances of it being found immediately by the owner are low, she would have no qualms taking it. "Life is both skill and chance," people often say, "The successful cultivate the former and accept the latter." (They don't have the concept of good or bad fortune, supernatural help, or luck.)

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#PennedPossibilities 610 — What are the most significant sounds we hear in your WIP? For example, it could be the sounds of nature or the noises of a bustling town.

In Mars Needed Women, in the dome habitats that are built both on the surface and in excavated tunnels:

  • Utter and complete silence, which a recent woman imported from Earth would definitely notice. It is nothing like living in the Lakeshore arcology she was raised in outside of Chicago. It's a pressure in the ears when May Ri thinks about it. Loneliness would sound like that.
  • In May Ri's vicinity, a hungry infant or the complaint of a toddler wanting more attention.
  • Ventilation.
  • The weak whistle of a Martian dust storm through the shroom-brick walls of the habitats.
  • In some places, machinery excavating.
  • In farm domes, the hiss and shish of sprinklers and misters.
  • People's voices when in the corridors.
  • The wonderful sound their bed makes when her husband is home for the half-dozen intermittent weeks a year when he's off assignment.

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### #Reading in Week Ten of 2025
~1200 words | March 03–09 | #BokBooks

●●●◐○ Exile of the Eons - Arthur C. Clarke (ss) 1950
  The Master hoped to rule the world, and came closer than most. When his forces were almost defeated, he retreated to a bunker deep in a mountain and entered a suspended animation chamber, planning to wake in a century and try again. But the awakening device malfunctioned, and he slept on.
  Millennia later, when humans had spread across the galaxy, Trevindor the Philosopher clashed with the Empire. They were too civilized to kill him, but they could exile him to the far future, on a backward planet called Earth.
  When Trevindor awoke, he searched for years, trying to find another living being beneath the bloated red sun. Finally he found a metal bunker exposed by erosion…

●●●●○ Hollywood Horror - Paul Ernst {Doctor Satan 3} (nvt) 1935
  Doctor Satan's latest diabolical invention is a ray that turns flesh – but not bone – invisible, leaving a famous actress with a lovely body with a skull atop it. Unless the rich studio heads pay him millions, they'll be next. It's wealthy amateur sleuth Ascott Keane to the rescue again. He tells the moguls not to pay, and saves one from the ray, at the cost of the flesh on his right hand going transparent. Now he must track down Doctor Satan's lair to vanquish the villain. #WeirdTales #thriller

●●●●○ Of Men and Monsters - William Tenn (nov) 1968
  Untold generations ago, huge advanced aliens colonized Earth. Humankind lost all its civilization and science, and was reduced to living like mice in the walls of their giant structures, while the six-legged, long-necked, brontosaur-like beings (with a ruff of finger-tentacles) mostly ignored them.
  Eric, from a front-burrow tribe (primitive warriors who raid Monster larders for food and useful material), loses his tribe (politics) after his Theft (the solo run that's a manhood ceremony), then gets captured by Monsters, and meets Rachel, from a more advanced back-burrow tribe. An interesting tale, rather damaged by the out-of-nowhere ending that shows that things were both better and worse than they seemed.

●●●○○ Final Enemy - L. Ron Hubbard (ss) 1950
  Earth, as represented by the Western Alliance and the Asian Union, had been exploring the galaxy for over a century. They'd found no signs of another spacefaring civilization, until a Western ship heard a story from the Aloyts, a currently primitive people, that a ship had wiped out millions maybe 75 years ago. The Asians heard of a similar tale elsewhere soon thereafter. In a panic, West and East confederated. Now the quest was on to find the Enemy before they found Earth… #SciFi

●●◐○○ Isolationist - Mack Reynolds (ss) 1950
  Alex Wood was a crotchety old man. He'd lost both his sons to war, and his wife to cancer, and he was in no mood to have some weird-looking man with an odd accent land an experimental ship in the middle of his sweet corn field. He gave that foreigner a piece of his mind.
  The Galactic Union accepted that Earth was not interested in help. Atomic wars destroyed the civilization within a century.

●●●○○ Panic Button - Eric Frank Russell (ss) 1959
  Terrans and Antareans were both scrambling for new worlds, and they used the same type. "Finders keepers" was the rule: first to put people on a planet owned it. Disputing that could lead to war. But when an Antarean ship landed on a world and an extensive search showed that one and only one Terran was on the planet, they were tempted to make him disappear. But he'd already hit the big button, and the blue light turned on…

●●●●◐ Infinity Gate - M R Carey {Pandominion 1} (nov) 2023
  Hadiz Tambuwal: the Nigerian particle physicist who discovered how to travel to alternate Earths, not long before the final war on her messed-up Earth.
  Essien Nkanika: the minor thief and part-time sex worker Hadiz turned to for companionship when she moved to his Earth – sorry, Terr [sic] – while she carried on her research.
  Hadiz died in an encounter with the Pandominion, the Union of a hundred thousand variant Earths, when she demonstrated her invention to Essien and inadvertently appeared on one of their worlds. He ended up a Pando soldier fighting the Machine Hegemony.
  Topaz Tourmaline FiveHills: a rabbit-descended high-schooler who befriended – and went on the run with – Dulcimer; she would change the Pandominion's relationship with the bound artificial intelligences that served it.
  Dulcimer Standfast Coronal: a Machine extrusion from a polity bigger than the Pandominion, whose Earths the organics had intruded upon, and immediately set to warring with. Appearing as another lagomorph student, Dulcimer was investigating if these odd biological beings were sapient. Friendship changed Dulcie into an individual in the course of her assignment. Deciding she didn't want her consciousness melted back into the fluid overmind of the Machine Hegemony, Dulcimer fled.
  A researcher, a rogue, a rebel, and a robot: together they remade the multiverse.¹ #ScienceFiction

●●◐○○ Imitation of Death - Lester Del Rey (ss) 1950
  Earth had settled Mars, Venus, and the Jovian moons. When those colonies declared independence and set up a Planetary Council, the dreamers ruling Earth had begged to join what they should have ruled. The dreamers had been put aside.
  Practical realists ruled Earth now, and they used men like Max Fleigh to get their way. He had helped the Plutarchy² set up the Asteroid Colonies, and installed the leaders who would quietly follow Earth's line when the Belters got a Council seat.
  Now they needed one more vote on the Council. Fleigh and his henchman had kidnapped Martian Councillor Curtis, and replaced him with a life model decoy. It wouldn't be needed for long, just long enough for the critical vote. Except the simulacrum had other ideas…

●●●◐○ Hate - Rog Phillips (ss) 1948
  Gregory Jones was selected as a backup for an automatic, self-repairing station monitoring etheric eddies. (The Solar Service had found that a man might go mad in two years of solitude, but scholars writing a book were least likely to, and using only one man avoided murders.) His declared goal was researching the occult in history and literature.
  Gregory held that Hate was the most powerful human emotion, and could accomplish much. His research enabled him to develop a device that allowed him to materialize and dematerialize matter, as well as make himself an immaterial, invisible phantom. And many more things, in this odd but interesting tale that got much wider than expected.

***
[1] Among various interesting things – I quite like this book – two are worthy of a footnote. First, the book never says ‘person’ or ‘people’. It always says ‘self’ or ‘selves’ instead. Second, it introduces #pronouns for non-biological minds: et/et/ets/ets/etself. Et told me etself. I gave et the news. Ets opinion differs. I have mine, et has ets.

[2] They call themselves this publicly, not even trying to hide it.

Cumulative 2025 totals as of Week Ten:
62 ss | 06 nvt | 02 nva | 18 nov